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Sentence 1. According to Shackle states that (1998) displaced aggression is where aggressive action is taken against an innocent person or object and usually occurs when the cause of disappointment is unknown or too powerful to attack (page 20). |
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Sentence 2. Limiting an argument or possibilities to only two alternatives simplistic leading to a view of everythings as "cops and robbers, happy or sad, gilty or innocent, yes or no situations. (Jones, S.F. 1990 - Chap. 3 page 156, in Arron) |
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